Wednesday, September 22, 2010

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The Lost Kid

               One day while a policeman was walking in the neighbourhood, he found a lost kid named Alex. After that, the policeman asked him “Where is your home? I’ll take you back,” but the little boy started crying because he didn’t want to go back home. Then the policeman took him to the nearest restaurant. In the restaurant, all the furniture was white except the stools were green. Alex sat on the right stool with his red clothing package on a long stick under his seat, and the policeman sat next to him on the left side. Later, the policeman started talking to Alex about why he ran away, so the boy said that his mother had a new baby girl. Because of that, she didn’t gave him a darn, and he felt that his mama didn’t like him anymore. In this moment, the waiter in front of them, with white shirt and a cigarette in his mouth, was listening to their conservation and smiling because the boy got him to look back on his childhood. Finally, the policeman said to Alex, like it or lump it, your mother must take care of your little sister because she couldn’t do anything for herself, but you are old enough to depend on yourself. In the end, Alex went back home with a big smile because now he is older.

10 comments:

  1. from Linda Wesley:

    Wow! What awesome details you have!

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  2. Oh! Thank you Linda for visiting my page

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  3. good job Asma it is really nice description with a good details.

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  4. Hi, Asma.
    Great job! This story is very good.
    I like the happy ending of this story. :-)

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  5. Nice job Asma, It is an intresting story :D

    keep going :)

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  6. Your paragraph always attracted me!
    I like your description.

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  7. You made nice details. :)
    I like your paragraph.

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  8. I like your way to discribe the pic

    Keep going sister

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  9. wow! you created a complete story! i liked it!

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  10. yes, Asma has good vocabulary and ability to write well with her perfect description

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